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1997年专四作文真题:Does More pressure good to us

发布时间:2013-05-15 00:53浏览次数:2076
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Direction:Some of your classmates think that more pressure from academic studies is not beneficial to students. You either agree or disagree with them:More pressure from academic studies does good to us
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With the increasing social competition,more and more pressure are imposed on our people.Some people think that more pressure can make them more ambitious.While others seem to be not so agreeable.From my perspective,having more pressure is not such a good thing as someone thought.The following I'll give my reasons. To begin with,as a saying goes,"No pressure,No motivation''.we cannot deny the advantages that pressure bring to us.Moderate pressure can stimulate people go ahead to pursue their dreams.While,more pressure can often make people out of breath in the modern competitive world.Furthermore,it is a common occurence that people get mental disease because of pressure.Even worse,some people suicide in that they can barely tolerate the pressure coming from their life. All in all,moderate pressure can alert us.But more pressure can break our body down.

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