2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于体罚

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；连词使用偏少。

The first one tells us teachers should care more about their children's self-esteem. The teachers don't want to push the students too hard for fear of hurting their feelings. They encourage their students to find their own path. The second one"wolf father" tells us parents should be strict with the children. Being strict is the only way to develop a child's potential and to make them strong, independent and successful. I think more students should not to be hit by teacher.Because,it will make shudents feel they are not good and hit them self-eateem and potential.