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With the popularity of the Internet, more and more people do shopping online. Without going out of their home, they may look for whatever items they want and pay online only by clicking the mouse. A couple of days later, the goods they buy online will be delivered at their front door. As for this new phenomenon, people have different ideas about it. Some think that doing shopping online is time- and energy-saving. People can buy anything at anytime they like without a computer hooked onto the Internet. They may say good-bye to the exhausting journey of searching. While others believe that they cannot touch, smell, or taste what they want. They don’t feel certain about their choice. Besides, they doubt whether the companies will deliver the right items at right time to a right place. In my opinion, shopping online is convenient indeed. But we should be very careful when we decide which item to buy and with company is trustworthy. Additionally, we should guard against the hackers who intend to steal our account passwords
