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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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要求：: Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown，what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?

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dear mary you said you will visit my hometown , i am very happy and i will introduce some interestingplace to you my hometown is PINGWU it has a big temple named BAO EN it has many gold buddhas they are very beautiful . second i will take you to JIANG YOU GUAN it was LI Bai's home many years ago maybe you don't know LI Bai he was a poet in Tang dynasty and he was very famous,many people adored him and I like him too when you arrive my hometown I will take you to see him and you can take some photos about him . my hometown has many interestingplaces when you arrive you will understand write me soon best wishs from Lisa

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