2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于体罚

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；可以适当增加副词的使用。

The first one tells us teachers should care more about their children's self-esteem. The teachers don't want to push the students too hard for fear of hurting their feelings. They encourage their students to find their own path. The second one"wolf father" tells us parents should be strict with the children. Being strict is the only way to develop a child's potential and to make them strong, independent and successful. I hope that my parents and teachers should be the first one. In this way, I can enjoy myself and develop my potential. I am a very quiet girl. I like this way.