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2012年10月27日雅思大作文真题:广告到底能不能影响人们的消费

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:56浏览次数:6935
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题目要求:

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

题目讲解:

题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。

广告使人们都看上去一样,也就是广告的宣传效应会影响人们的消费行为 manipulate people's buying behaviour然后掀起一些特定品牌的时尚create fashion。也就是去写广告的影响力会使一些brands垄断市场monopolise the market。
但是广告其实并不会使人们都一样,我们不能低估人们对于产品质量和个人喜好的理性underestimate people's rationality to products quality and the influence of personal preference.
这么一分析,还是我们说的广告经典题,广告到底能不能影响人们的消费!
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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者句法知识掌握的错误,可适当增加从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Have you even been dropped into this situation-When you are watching TV shows, or surfing the Internet, some advertising come to your eye or your screen, then you are absorbed on the clothes or tools or something else which occurs on the advertising? Or have you ever been distressed that you are wearing the same clothes and taking a same bag that you bought because of the advertising propaganda with others when you are walking on the street? Some people believe that more and more advertising makes people have the same chose and same behaviors for daily shopping. Even more, the advertising make people have the trend to make up same and look like the same one even though they have different backgrounds, different appearances. Such as the promoting of plastic surgery makes people look same because all people want to look beautiful and have a dream to be a star, of course, the beautiful people maybe have same style: big eyes, exquisite face and white skin. Then the one who wants be beautiful will ask their doctors to face-lift according to that style. What's more, some advertising companies encourage people to buy some healthy products, some clothes, some bags by inviting some movie stars, singers as their models. Because of the affection of famous people, some people will chose these products because the products are promoting by stars have the quality indemnification, and in the result, more and more people chose to use the same thing. However, some people hold the opposite idea. Every person has their own preference, and they will chose what they really like but not mislead by the advertising. We should not underestimate human beings' abilities that distinguish different brands and styles. The different consummate conceptions, different lives, and different extent to the fashion and so on, will make people chose different brands. So don't be worried about that advertising will make everyone look like same. In my opinion, as the developing of technology, advertising is becoming more and more fashionable. But advertising just provides us ways to help us make chose, and it can never control our mind.

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