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it has a trend to surf on the internet,it can help s do some kinds of work.althrough it have no feelings and they only accept predestigned orders.they can be used in some danderous and poisioners working conditions.it work more efficiently than human beings .it can undeerstand our orders .they could be widely used.so w have more time to relax as far as i am concerned ,it will be widy used in the future.they can do what we can,t do.but no matter how ,it can not take the place of our brains.