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When the staring of new term,most of us will catch out a illness which is called"hoiiday sympertem" The illness will lead us to feel uncomfortable.For example,in the statement we feel tired,and we cant't finish the job effenciency as l`last term do,even many people are tired of eating,and feei upset. How does our body? Why do we feel so bad after holiday ? The reason is the bad habit we spend our holiday time.In winter holiday we will experience the lunner spring festival.In this day we tended to stay up to welcome a new year .So we will sleep vary late.In other days ,we have to meet old friends,classmates and ralations.We had a crazy life diffferent from we spend in school.Consequently,at the begining of new term,we can't calm down. But how can we to solve the problem more quickly? I think we must have a proper life.In weeekend,we should spend more time in sleeping to relax. In work time we could drink more tea and eat more fruits when we feel tired of our work,listenning some music and reading books. In a word,we should keep still to abjuct to the term.
