拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Language is a bridge to connect person to person to allow each other communicate and in daily life . As we live in differences country with variety of culture , dialects as a variety of language also being an hot topic to be discuss that , whether dialects should be just as acceptable in public places and to my opinion , it should be . Dialects is not only a language , to me it represents a culture ,a soul of a races or even a country . To a country which is full with variety of culture and races , it is a great thing that dialects allow a more wide channel of communication among people and also indirectly , to allow us explore to differences culture of certain country or races . Isn't it fun and joyful experiences that while you find out from a differences native friend that a words can pronounces and express it meaning with such a differences and interesting way that while it is spoke in differences dialect ? Differences enrich our life . i believe that by accept the dialects in public places ,it is not only will make communication among people easier however it also can enrich a country culture and build up positive rapport among people with differences native .