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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3091
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Is it wise to make friends online? Nowadays, it is an ordinary thing that make friends online, especially young people. As a youth, i think it's wise to make friends online. It's a world which full of competition, the people who live on this competitive world are under pressures. Sometimes, we are unhappy, but we don't want to tell our family or friends in real life. Thus, make friends online become a way for us to relax ourselves. Make friends online, we don't know who you are in real life, but we still can share our feeling each other. If we have heavy pressures, we can find some ways of reducing pressure from our online friends by chatting. Telling the unhappy things to our online friends, we don't need worry about our family will know it and we don't need worry about our unhappy feelings will trouble our family. Besides, if we make friends online, we can make more friends from all over the world and know some special things, which can broaden our horizon and enhance our knowledge. Life is not easy, nowadays people are living in a competitive world and full of pressures. In order to make us ease, it's a good way to make friends online and share our feelings and broaden our horizon. So, strange friends make us more ease; internet makes life much better.

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