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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
When the staring of new term,most of us will develop a illness which is called"holiday symptom" The illness will lead us to feel uncomfortable.For example,in the statement we feel tired,and we can't finish the job efficiently as last term do,even many people are tired of eating,and feel upset. How does our body? Why do we feel so uncomfortable after the holiday? The reason is the habit that we pick up in the holiday when we will experience the spring festival.In this day we tended to stay up to welcome a new year.As a result, we fell asleep late.In other days,we had to meet old friends,classmates and relations.We had a crazy life different from we spent in school.Consequently,at the beginning of the new term,we can't calm down. But how can we to solve the problem more quickly? I think we must have a proper life.In weekend,we should spend more time in sleeping to relax. In addition,we can drink tea and more fruits when we feel tired of work in woke-time.Besides,we can also listen to music and read more books. In a word,we should keep still to abject to the term.
