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Nowadays,arts festival is more and more popular at university.It is a wonderful way to enrich college student's life and relaxing their brains after a series of classes.So I am a supporter of advocating this meaningful activity's development.Besides,I think the content of arts festival should be more creative attractive and abundant. What we can do to make arts festival be more colorful?I think it is complicating and difficult,but I can still list some points.First,unquestionably,culture is the theme of this activity.So it is necessary to offer some special performances about several cultures,including chinese classical culture,model culture and western culture.Students can learn more from the difference between native culture and foreign culture. Second,the form and the type of content should not be unique.They should be recreated and enriched.Such as language,music,draw,technology ect,all of them should be contained.As a result of that,arts festival will be more significant. As far as I am concerned,arts festival as a important part of college life should be developed and paid more attentions,which contributes to reach a unforgettable college years.