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2005年专业四级英语作文真题:我对艺术节的看法

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:25浏览次数:3249
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题目 My idea of a university arts festival
说明 The students' Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribute their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be included.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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Nowadays,arts festival is more and more popular at university.It is a wonderful way to enrich college student's life and relaxing their brains after a series of classes.So I am a supporter of advocating this meaningful activity's development.Besides,I think the content of arts festival should be more creative attractive and abundant. What we can do to make arts festival be more colorful?I think it is complicating and difficult,but I can still list some points.First,unquestionably,culture is the theme of this activity.So it is necessary to offer some special performances about several cultures,including chinese classical culture,model culture and western culture.Students can learn more from the difference between native culture and foreign culture. Second,the form and the type of content should not be unique.They should be recreated and enriched.Such as language,music,draw,technology ect,all of them should be contained.As a result of that,arts festival will be more significant. As far as I am concerned,arts festival as a important part of college life should be developed and paid more attentions,which contributes to reach a unforgettable college years.

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