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Hello!everyone.We will talk to about How to study English well.Now,If i was a representative of English lesson.I think i want to tell yours learning English is very necessary.Because English is an international language.If you want to go to other contries that you must be learn English well.But now I recive to some problems about study English.Such as,Lily siad:"I always can't laern English,that's so boring for me.whatever i can't get a great greads".look this,I want to tell you if you don't learn English well,I suggest you.in many ways you can listen English music about you intestings and you can find a foreigner friend to improve you English too.Finally you can find a English teacher help you and your classmate too