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湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:13浏览次数:2766
要求:
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是一名英语课代表,发现部分同学对英语学习失去了信心。请你写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文来鼓励他们,唤起其对学习英语的兴趣。
写作要点:
1、学习英语的重要性。
2、提高英语成绩的措施(至少3点)。
用户的作文(系统评分56.0分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Hello!everyone.We will talk to about How to study English well.Now,If i was a representative of English lesson.I think i want to tell yours learning English is very necessary.Because English is an international language.If you want to go to other contries that you must be learn English well.But now I recive to some problems about study English.Such as,Lily siad:"I always can't laern English,that's so boring for me.whatever i can't get a great greads".look this,I want to tell you if you don't learn English well,I suggest you.in many ways you can listen English music about you intestings and you can find a foreigner friend to improve you English too.Finally you can find a English teacher help you and your classmate too

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