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Hello!Everyone.We will talk to about How to study English well.Now,If i was a representative of English lesson.I think i want to tell yours learning English is very necessary.Because English is a good language.If you want to go to other countries that you must be learn English well.Recently I recrive to some problems for study English.Such as,Lily said:"I always can't learn English,that's so boring for me.Whatever i can't get a great grads".Look this,I want to tell you if you don't learn English well,I suggest you.In many ways you can listen to English music about you interstings and you can find a foreigner friend to improve you English too.Finally you can find a English teacher help you and your classmate too