牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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This weekend I visited Beijing Wildlife Zoo. There are many wild animals there. Many visitors enjoyed themselves. They gave food to monkeys and played with tigers. Animals and people get on well with each other. We should be friendly towards them. It is important to protect environment. We mustn’t litter about the zoo.