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at present ,as is known to all , excessive packgaing is a normal phenominen that as though we paid much for in . as far as i'm concerned , it is due to a lot of reason why there so much excessive packgaing are around us . on the one hand , it results from commercial aspects . in they's opnion , excessive packaging will hava a illusion of great quality and good serve especially to customers , which most bring about bisiness . on the other hand , because of low awareness . in general way , many of working at packaging are laboria staff who can't understand the importance of green environmental protection packing . what's more , the lack og policy plays a serious part . in spite of the fact that packaging is an easy produce , it can't be separeted from advanced techology and idea . furthermore , the relevant packaging standards should be carried out as long as possible .
