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Today the topic we would like to discuss is whether to put all eggs in one basket or not.From the education form our parents and teachers that we should make all efforts whatever you do. But in my opinion ,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.It's mainly lie in the follwing two aspects.Fistly,you could be hard to turn another road while you can't through in the present road.Just like you give all your power to insist on one aspects,you know nothing besides it.when you can't make some achievement in that territory,you'll lose the faith to life and lose the ability to make live.In addition,you'll get a big strike while your basket is overturned.Just imagine that,how hard to support when a singer get the research that he can't singing anymore as he know nothing except singing. All in all,we can certainly conclusion that it's unwise to put all efforts to abosultely one thing.That's to say,we must develop more than two skills to make our life more coloful.
