过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用学术词汇。
From what is vividly depicted by the cartoon above,we can observe distinctly that a job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation,complaining that she will never take a job of serving others.Meanwhile,she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society. This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life,especially on campus.On the one hand,many job-seekers are reluctant to take some jobs ,such as being a secretary or an assistant ,in that they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success.What is amazing is that they are not conscious that the ambition need to be achieved step by step.On the other hand,wanting to gain more but pay less,both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid,relaxed and comfortable.Accordingly,this kind of attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development.We should not look down upon service industry,the third industry,in that it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions. Therefore,it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.For one thing,an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that the longest journey starts with a single step and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life.For another,the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young.Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be obtained.
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