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A case in point is a USA people fortuitous adventure in london.a boy no money in the life. He is very poor,so he often go to pick the garbage food to be eat.one time , he meet to two rich people and they make a bet. So rich people get a milions of pounds check to he,but a milions of pounds is not cash.As is aften the case a milions of pounds check have not meaned.A month get to,he not only have not hunger or to not arrested,and became is rich people in the life.Finally he to be a very rich boy and get to a beatiful grily.The stroy tells us haven't people is very good.Because they love money,sarcastic life in london
