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文章词汇表达不够丰富，在拼写方面也要继续努力；采用了一些简单的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
A case in point is a USA people fortuitous adventure in london.That a boy not money in the life. He is very poor,so he often go to pick the garbage food to be eat.One time, he meet to two rich people and they make a bet. So rich people get a mi-lions of pounds check to he,but a mi-lions of pounds is not cash.As is aften the case a mi-lions of pounds check have not mean-ed.A month get to,he not only have not hunger or to not arrested,and became is rich people in the life.Finally he to be a very rich boy and get to a beatiful grily.The stroy tells us haven't people is very good.Because they love money,sarcastic life in london
