作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I very appreciate your distinguished company to prive me this job offer. I am so sorry for that I can't accept this job offer.The reasons have multifaced.Firstly,the ability what the job remanded is not my major.So I think I can't do it well,even though I would have try my best.I think the limit of my major ability about this job would have a bad influence to your conpany to develop as fast as she can,and the limit would obstacle my major to improve to it should be as well.Secondly,I rent a house which located on the road that between the city center and the town.So the distance is too far to go to work on time for me.There is not a bus or subway which I can get to go to work directly.Thirdly,the work time is on night that is dangerous to me,as a girl. As description above all,I hope that your company can considerate my trouble which would happen if I got the offer.However,the best wishes for you and your company.Thank you.