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2005年12月英语六级作文真题:Declining a job offer

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:30浏览次数:1173
要求:
Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer. You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below: 
1.对公司提供职位表示感谢 
2.解释为何不能接受所提供职位的原因 
3.希望予以谅解,并表达对公司的良好祝愿. 
用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

I very appreciate your distinguished company to prive me this job offer. I am so sorry for that I can't accept this job offer.The reasons have multifaced.Firstly,the ability what the job remanded is not my major.So I think I can't do it well,even though I would have try my best.I think the limit of my major ability about this job would have a bad influence to your conpany to develop as fast as she can,and the limit would obstacle my major to improve to it should be as well.Secondly,I rent a house which located on the road that between the city center and the town.So the distance is too far to go to work on time for me.There is not a bus or subway which I can get to go to work directly.Thirdly,the work time is on night that is dangerous to me,as a girl. As description above all,I hope that your company can considerate my trouble which would happen if I got the offer.However,the best wishes for you and your company.Thank you.

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