牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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welcome to the zoo． i'm xiao wang． today i will show you around the zoo． now let me tell you the plan for today． first， we will go to the lion park． then we will go to the monkey hill． you can see the lovely monkeys there． the bird world is next to the monkey hill． there are all kinds of birds． finally， we will go to the panda house． the famous animals look very honest． you will like them very much． remember， don't feed them． let's take good care of the animals． 　　i hope you will have a good time． thank you．