2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will It's said that" There is a will, there is a way." So the will, especially the strong will, is regarded as a good quality. And only if we have a strong will, can we succeed. Do you agree with it? Actually, I agree with it totally. A person who is timid, shy in each situation, extremly tender or even don't have his or her own idea is hard to succeed. And the great missions are awalys completed by the person who have a strong will. Because the successful way is filled with difficult or even despairs, we have to face those challenges and deal they. And awalys we have handle all those problems by ourselves. Studying is same too. If we are lazy or don't work hard, we will not be a usefull man in the future and Edison said: "Genius is 1 percent inspiration plus 99% of the sweat." So, let's get move, we'll succeed!