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2004年专业四级英语作文真题:电话与写信

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:23浏览次数:1456
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Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each other. So, some say that phones will kill letter writing. What is your opinion?
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?
You are to write in three parts:
In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

题目:Letter Writing Will Not Be Killed
字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

文章词汇丰富度较好,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

In recent years,with the development of economy and technology,cellphone is playing an important role in people's daily live.In a sense,people can't live without it,especially for young people.On the contrary,it is hard to found someone who is still keep touch with others in writing.So I think eventually the idea of letter writing will be killed by phones its will be carried out. Why I make this conculsion?There are some reasons of mine.First,nobody can challenge that we are living in a age that almost peopel pursues a fast step.The quick society ask us must to move quickly,which result in the phone is being more irreplaceable.Second,with the time goes by,writing is not truely be accepted by young people who more likely to learn something fresh compare to it.So phone is more suitable for the model live.Third,the time's change require us must to have more communications and contractions with the outside world,which is essential for someone's success in the his or her career.And it can be realised by phone but not writing. All in all,phone is extremely important for people's development,it will be never out of time.So I can certain that letter writing will be killed.

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