2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(69):防止空气污染

作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用学术词汇；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

China`s north coast is blanketed in toxic haze . The public have mistaken haze for smog for several years , in which case China has missed a large amount of precious changes and cherishing time to reduce air pollution . Chai Jing , former CCTV reporter , who made a 103 minutes presentation “China`s Haze : Under the Doom” revealed that this project was inspired by the illness of her new-born daughter . She has been praised because this presentation has aroused the public`s environment awareness . Continuous days of severe haze give rise to the attention from thousands and millions of citizens . We all know that countries on this planet ought to join forces to address environment problems . But ubiquitously , we human beings seldom attempt to really do something meaningful to turn the dream , reducing air pollution , come true . People are now used to the carnage on this planet . Haze is destructive and to some degree can be lethal , hence the desire to Here is a common pattern illustrating the reaction of the public when facing the disastrous reports . At the beginning , they may feel shocked , may be sympathetic to the refugees and lay the blame on God or governments , but not themselves . They might be concerned with the related reporting , during the forthcoming weeks . But that , unfortunately , all the emotion will be gone with time . It is that has been popular among people since last century . The writer of this book pointed out that the issue of callousness was a fatal problem , effectively putting a brake on development . If we long for a green life , we should restrict ourselves at first . For instance , driving cars is not supposed to be a priority when we can walk or take public transport . It is no using talking without doing . One action , and we will live a far more healthy life .