2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(41):乘公交车与骑自行车

文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

One is by bus,another is by bicycle.Go to school by bus can save our time and energy,while cycling can exercise our body and is convenience and flexible. In my opinion, i prefer to go to school by bicycle.Not only it is environmentlly-friendly,but build up my body.When driving,i can view the surroundings around and relax me.I can get away with stress when i driving and it really do good to me.It is so good as it reduce the production of carbon dioxide that make our living places more beautiful. As for by bus,though it save time and energy,it could not exercise our body.And sitting into a bus keep us away from beautiful scenery,which could not let us feel the beauty of nature.