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2004年专业四级英语作文真题:电话与写信

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:23浏览次数:1454
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Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each other. So, some say that phones will kill letter writing. What is your opinion?
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?
You are to write in three parts:
In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

题目:Letter Writing Will Not Be Killed
字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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作者能较好的使用一些学术词汇,同时要避免个别拼写错误;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Nowdays, with the popularity of communication technology, more and more people can't live without phone. As a result, some people are worried that phones will kill letter writting. However, I thinks they are unessary to worry in that letter writting has some exclusive advantages over phone. There are several reasons for this. First of all, sending a letter costs less phoning,especially when a person you want to communicate with live in another place. On experiences, you spend no more than 1yuan on a letter. But usually it costs you at least several yuan or more to phone a person. Secondly, there are many situations which letters are more appropriate or feasible than phone calls. For example,if you invite one of your good friends to attend your wedding, it;s better to send him a letter of invitation than jjust to phone him. Last but no least, letters are often written in more appropriable and logical way. During the course of writting a letter, you would weigh your wore carefully. In contrast, during a phone conversation, you are easy to speak out of your ideas without mature thought. Taking the above factors into consideration, phones cannot instead of letters. Either of them has its own advantage and disadvantage.

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