- 分享到:
作者词汇基本功很好，在学术词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
How to deal with the relationship between human beings and nature is a bitter-sweet subject that has been debated at length. The outbreak of PM 2.5 and Ebola disease are the things we don't want to have happened. If human beings still unaware of rescuing themselves, they will end up nowhere. So, what effective measures could be adopted to save our world by appropriately handling the relationship between human beings and nature? These are some suggestions as follows: First, people should be alarmed with the predicament we human being are confronted with. Earthquake, tsunami flood and other natural disasters are happened before but not with that frequency and extent. And there are things never happen before. Such as the PM 2.5 and Ebola. All these calamities are caused by greedy human beings. The majority of people, however, choose to bury their heads like turkey when facing dangers. But the problem still exists and can become even worse if people let them go. To raise the public attention to air pollution, Caijing, a famous Chinese journalist, cost millions to record a documentary telling people the serious consequence human beings have brought. The act receives a good effect and the government start to make laws to regulate pollution. Therefore, the first thing we need to do is to raise people’s attention to it. For example, more public service advertisement should be broadcast and supervision on the execution of environment protection laws should be strengthened. Second, following the reflection is the action. No one can reap by doing nothing but just talking. Personally, we may liter less trash and plant more trees. As for enterprise, they should follow the procedures accordingly. On the government level, those who breach the regulations should be punished. If one would put into jail by polluting the environment, i think it will scare most people from doing so. All in all, what we do now is to have the correct attitude first and then act accordingly. It will be a day to pop the champagne corks and rejoice.
