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作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
I always agree that forming our own destiny is related to what our ambition about .A person without ambition just like a car without GPS and will tend to lost in the journey . An ambition person will have a more fast and steady journey to achieve his target instead of an less ambitious person. I agree that less ambition person do get what they want too however compare to people who have clear picture of what they want , the latter faster to getting back on their way especially when meet obstacle . Differences between them is minor however the outcome can be major as people without clear target tend to be easily lost their way or give up half way of journey . Be ambitious is essential especially in current fast pace enviroment as it allow us to achieve our target easier and joyful !
