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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299[网页划词已开启]
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

How to succeed in a job interview? This is a topic issue in such a rapid developing country. As more and more colleges and universities students graduated,finding a job that suits for us is much more hardly.let us talk about something about job interview. Job interview is a progress that we get an applied work. Through a job interview,the interviewer an realize a lot of things about the interviewee,such as the characters,the ability to communicate with others,the ability to meet changes situation and so on. From these aspects,we can find that something very important in getting a decent job. From our appearance,wo should pay more attention on our cloths and gesture when we communicate with others,especially the interviewer. Also our abilities about our basic knowledge and attitude to the changing world. At last but not the least,wo must believe ourselves. Attaching much attention on what we want to get,we can gain.

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