2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(28):珍爱生命 拒闯红灯

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Cherish life, refuse crossing the street when the red light is on The phenomenon of crossing the street when the red light is very common in China.If you stand near a cross, you can see pedpestrians of different ages-young or old,different genders-male or female crossing the street without caring if the light is red or green.Sometimes a single individual is too timid to do this, so a big crowd of people surge forward when the red light is on. However crossing the street when the red is on is a very bad behavior. It not only interferes the transporation so that other vichels cannot drive properly, it puts the jay-walkers' lives at riks because it is easily to cause traffic accidents. What punishtive measures must be taken against the jay-walkers? First, trafic police should educate them so that they can realize the potential harm of running red light can bring. Secondly, the jay-walker should be repremanded and fined.