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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,most people are living under a lot of pressure,they are from study,work or many other things.People's live always easily affected by their pressure,so it is extremely important for people to keep a good mood no matter where they are. Why I say so much like that?There are some of my reasons.On the one hand,keeping a good mood is very useful for people to have a right value,that's help people to set up a positive attitude toward life.And as a result of that,there will be less people to complain about the stressful and mess life.On the other hand,people have more chances to carry out many of their plans those settled earlier if they could keep a good mood in anytime.And at the same time,it's also will contributes to have a good human relationship,because people will be good to handle matters if they can control themselves well,which contributes to be happy and successful in their future. In conclusion,it is necessary and important to keep a good mood in daily life.I believe that people's life will be more satisfied if they can learn it.
