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2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:19浏览次数:3977[网页划词已开启]
要求:
题目 The importance of keeping a good mood.
说明 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of keeping a good mood.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,most people are living under a lot of pressure,they are from study,work or many other things.People's live always easily affected by their pressure,so it is extremely important for people to keep a good mood no matter where they are. Why I say so much like that?There are some of my reasons.On the one hand,keeping a good mood is very useful for people to have a right value,that's help people to set up a positive attitude toward life.And as a result of that,there will be less people to complain about the stressful and mess life.On the other hand,people have more chances to carry out many of their plans those settled earlier if they could keep a good mood in anytime.And at the same time,it's also will contributes to have a good human relationship,because people will be good to handle matters if they can control themselves well,which contributes to be happy and successful in their future. In conclusion,it is necessary and important to keep a good mood in daily life.I believe that people's life will be more satisfied if they can learn it.

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