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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40893
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Is unwise to draw a conclusion quickly when you just saw or heard something. Some people may lose patience to analy the essence of the event and make an fault conclusion toward one thing or one person.For example,when you saw someone open a door you can't actually say that he is come home or ready to leave home.So,the conclusion you draw when you just saw or heard something maybe an error spoken. Time goes back to my childredhood,i said some foolish words.Remeber that day,a gardener was cutting leaves and decorating flowers in our garden.I was blame him for destory my flowers as soon as i saw him.Of course,i was being told all the truth finally.I also apologized to the gardener for my rudeness. Beyond my story,i can tell you taht is fool to draw a conclusion before you know all the truth.

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