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Is unwise to draw a conclusion quickly when you just saw or heard something. Some people may lose patience to analy the essence of the event and make an fault conclusion toward one thing or one person.For example,when you saw someone open a door you can't actually say that he is come home or ready to leave home.So,the conclusion you draw when you just saw or heard something maybe an error spoken. Time goes back to my childredhood,i said some foolish words.Remeber that day,a gardener was cutting leaves and decorating flowers in our garden.I was blame him for destory my flowers as soon as i saw him.Of course,i was being told all the truth finally.I also apologized to the gardener for my rudeness. Beyond my story,i can tell you taht is fool to draw a conclusion before you know all the truth.
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