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I am fully agree that as students, we should be careful with our money in daily life, but I don't see eye to eye with thoese who collect all kinds of coupons and always look for group-buy deals when eating our or traveling and buy clothes unless in a sale. These habits relly don't make us smart consumers. In my view, coupons, group-buy deals or clothes in sale are acturally promotion efforts by the businesses. As consumers, we rarely can benefit from the purchasing, as either the quality of the goods or the service we buy will turn out to be satisfactory. I once had experience of group buying from a restarount a set mean which I paid full price a short time ago. When the group buy meal was served, I found it was given short measure. An probverb says-every extra penny deserves its value. Every product has its cost and the shops need to profit from selling it. Unless the product has defect or is out of fashion, the shop will not sell below its cost. So my suggestion is avoiding making impulsive purchasing. Don't buy cheap, buy what is needed and worthwhile.
