2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I have a good friend who lives in America.Yesterday,he called me that he will visit to me in recent days.I think I should prepare something for him.My hometown is in Beijing so I have many interesting places to show.After some consideration, I think the Great Wall is one of the best tour scenic spots, because it is a symbol of China's splendid culture.