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Like the old word said,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,we can not neglect the dangerous in our life.If you put all eggs in one basket,eggs will be broken when you drop your basket by accidence.But if you divide all your eggs into two or more different basket,only eggs in the basket you have dropped will be broken but not all eggs. I like cooking,especially creat new ways to cook meal.I make good use of my material so taht i will not waste too much.At first,i will make a trial to test my new idea.Only when i success in my trial,do i use all my material to cook delicious food. In one word,don't put all eggs in one basket show us that is important to escape dangerous.We should protect ourselves from being destoried by one fall.