小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. he is a smart boy. she has short hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. his voice is better.he is good at singing. He is a clever boy. he likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. he is also nice. he often helps us . our classmates like her very much.