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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:教育 Education

发布时间:2013-07-05 14:49浏览次数:1081
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of international students from four areas of the world who came to study at university level in a western country in 2000 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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请使用丰富多样的词汇表达,另外注意学术词汇的积累;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

The chart below shows datas about the numbers of international students from China India Japan Brazail who came to study at university level in a Western country in 2000 and 2005. We can see from the table chart that in a western country the Chinese students ranked the first in 2000(35,000).The students of Brazil accounted for the least,only had 2000 students.And the japanese students are the three time that of the Brazil.The indian students ranked the second(15,000). It is clear that the number of the chinese students decrease to the 22,000,in 2005.But China still ranked the first.By contract,the student of Brazil ranked third,the number had a increase.And the japanese students made up the least(4,000).And the indian students is four time that of the japanese students. Overall,we can know the chinese students accent for the greatest in the western country.And i believe that the go abroad four study is good for us .

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