2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

My Pinion On Certificate Craze Nowadays,with the rapid development of education,which causes that more and more people have got crazy about many kinds of exams to get a certificate compared with the past . somebody have done a survey on it.from the rusults,we can see,different people have different destinations on taking the exam.most of them hold the thought the certificate can prove a good ability in some way.other people ,howere,want to find a good job with more certificates.just a few people are based on the interest. as far as i am concerned,it's a wrong way to take kinds of exams unquestioningly.on the contrary,before we make a decision,we shoul ask ourselves whether we need it necessarily.