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Nowadays,with the rapid development of education,which causes that more and more people have got crazy about variet exams to get a certificate compared with the past . Somebody have done a survey on it.From the rusults,we can see,different people have different destinations on taking the exam.Most of them hold the thought the certificate can prove a good ability in some way.Other people ,howere,want to find a good job with more certificates.Just a few people are based on the interest. As far as i am concerned,it's a wrong way to take kinds of exams unquestioningly.On the contrary,before we make a decision,we should ask ourselves whether we need it necessarily.