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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1890
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
用户的作文(系统评分52.5分
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作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;熟练的采用了一些从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Don't be Afraid to Say "No" May people think it is a bead thing that say no to others people.This thought is faut,sometimes we can say no to others.For example,if the man ask for you help,you can say no to him at that present,first he asking is over your able,second you don't have lisure time,finally you don't want to help him.Some people don't say no to others when they should to say no,because they think it's a bead thing,or think their will give others a bead impression if they say no,and they doesn't how to say no. There have many disadvantage if you don't say no to others when you should to say no.First,the man will think you are a easy stoop.Secont,you will delay yourself work.Nest you will sit heavy on,if the man asking is over your able.

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