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Don't be Afraid to Say "No" May people think it is a bead thing that say no to others people.This thought is faut,sometimes we can say no to others.For example,if the man ask for you help,you can say no to him at that present,first he asking is over your able,second you don't have lisure time,finally you don't want to help him.Some people don't say no to others when they should to say no,because they think it's a bead thing,or think their will give others a bead impression if they say no,and they doesn't how to say no. There have many disadvantage if you don't say no to others when you should to say no.First,the man will think you are a easy stoop.Secont,you will delay yourself work.Nest you will sit heavy on,if the man asking is over your able.