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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13043
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

With the society developed,we have been in the very faster life than before and we hardly to hear in detail what people talk to us.For most people what matters to them is making money as they can as.So slowly communication bettwen people is becoming tight. It firstly happened to me and i shocked.I wonder why people always get into indifference-in order that making money or the mood of being the top of people? I think the matter to us is not making more money or be famous,what we prond of,even what we have,The most important for us is what we exist and we can feel others.What we have only is each other.So in that communication is rather important to us.In some way it can push our tighter.And communication can making where we live more peace.Communication not only walk down contradiction but also promote our psychological health.

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