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Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. the impact of human activities on the nature attracts more and more public attetion as the enviornment issuse become comtroversially influence people's daily life.