文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文中从句和复杂句使用较为丰富;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Somebody may thinks that "to see is to believe".But sometimes the conclusion that depends on what we saw and what we heard may be not true. What we need to get a conclusion is not only our eyes or ears,but also our brains.If we want to understand the truth,the most important things is to use our brains to think.When you sees a red flower,you shouldn't get a conclusion that it's a rose exactly,you should know its smell and observe its lifestyle,and then you can conclude what it is.When you hear someone say,"I want to be a thief."You shouldn't call the police exactly.If you listen more,you may hear that he was just telling a joke. Just think more,you'll find that you can know more.
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