小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is Bob. He is a boy. He is 13. He's address is Fuzhou Gulou. He comes from china. He is a very clever boy. He likes playing basketball. And he like playing the computer game. But he is a handsome. He likes singer is Jastin Bieber. He likes him very much. He likes game is LOL. It's a very good game. So he is my good friend