新东方托福高分作文:成功与运气有关吗?

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What success to us?Making money or get more honor and so on.It has some standard for everyone.But undoubled for that luck is the important part of one.Maybe some would wonder why luck is important for success?We have to admit everything of what happen in the future is unpredict so that we may cannot successed even we meet the need of success.What may happen would may happen.We cannot control the develop of things. Such as do we work hard and we can success?I think the anwser is not.