2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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This is my hometown and where is a beautiful village and when I was young.I used to visit a "sanjingtou" where are three spring,In ancient times many people used to wash clothes and vegetables. I think it is a beautiful place and has a long history and where I can visit many people places and so on. I think it is a beautiful place and which is a beautiful place.