拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;熟练的采用了一些从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
In recent years,with the improvement of the standards of living,now more and more people tends to pay more attentions to keep their fit.Different people have different ways to stay with healthy.And in my opinions,I think the best way to stay healthy is to do exercise regularly. People may have many rational reasons to support their views,but I am still insist on my idea.There are some of my points.To begin with,people also say that the physical healthy is most important,because anything in the live must be done base on a healthy body.And doing exercise regularly can keep energy that's set a stage for your working.Furthermore,doing exercise everyday is good to keep a positive attitude toward life,which contributes to build a kindness character and have correct value.If you want to be attractive and charming,keeping exercise is a effective way to reach it.That's why I thought do exercise regularly is the best way to keep healthy. As far as I am concerned,health is extremely essential for a human's life.So it is necessary to do exercise everyday in order to stay with healthy,and it will pave a way for a happy life.