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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
In recent years,with the development of the economy.Now more and more people are tends to pay more attentions to keep their fit.Different people have different ways to stay with healthy.And in my opinion,the best way to stay healthy is do exercise regularly. People may have many rational reasons to support their views,but I am still insist on my idea.There are some of my points.To begin with,people also say that the physical healthy is most important,because anything in the live must be done base on a healthy body.And doing exercise regularly can keep energy that's set a stage for your working.Furthermore,doing exercise everyday is good to keep a positive attitude toward life,which contributes to build a kindness character and have correct value.If you want to be attractive and charming,keeping exercise is a effective way to reach it.That's why I think it is essential to maintain exercise regularly. As far as I am concerned,health is extremely essential for a human's life.So it is necessary to keep exercise everyday,and it will pave a way for a happy life.
