2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man With the economic developing,people life better and better.Even everyone had a computer at home or other place,it is an important part of our life.Meanwile with the internet developed, a lot of merchandise we can buy online result in our life can not lose the computer.Which more covenience for us. However, every coins has two sides.The computer also have disadvatages for us.For example, we will addicted to play the games and wasted time.